Join me for short break of reflection and enjoy a cup of poetry.
ooo i wanna see the dance....and the spring...smiles....cool cinquain...
Beautiful! A mystical hopefullness rings in this one!
we are all so ready
Spring is magical!
Oh If it could be like that :-)
Very nice. Ha, I wish we would have some of this magic in my part of the world! (Smiles)
This is a lovely poem. You've broken the American cinquain form just a wee bit - an extra syllable in the last line - but the point of a prompt is to get you writing, not to provide a strait-jacket.
I am listening to robins as I write this so not far off for spring...nice ;)
oh nice...a bit of magic in this...i dance along...smiles
A warm welcome to spring !!!
The fae court of spring! nice.
I enjoy this cinquain very much because I'm enchanted with the fantasy faerie realm and the possibility of magic in all things. Very nice!
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ooo i wanna see the dance....and the spring...smiles....cool cinquain...
ReplyDeleteBeautiful! A mystical hopefullness rings in this one!
ReplyDeletewe are all so ready
ReplyDeleteSpring is magical!
ReplyDeleteOh If it could be like that :-)
ReplyDeleteVery nice. Ha, I wish we would have some of this magic in my part of the world! (Smiles)
ReplyDeleteThis is a lovely poem. You've broken the American cinquain form just a wee bit - an extra syllable in the last line - but the point of a prompt is to get you writing, not to provide a strait-jacket.
ReplyDeleteI am listening to robins as I write this so not far off for spring...nice ;)
ReplyDeleteoh nice...a bit of magic in this...i dance along...smiles
ReplyDeleteA warm welcome to spring !!!
ReplyDeleteThe fae court of spring! nice.
ReplyDeleteI enjoy this cinquain very much because I'm enchanted with the fantasy faerie realm and the possibility of magic in all things. Very nice!
ReplyDelete