Tuesday, March 5, 2013

Carpe Diem Special #25, Onitsura's Spring Haze

Spring bluebells
Carpet the forest
Mystic haze












Carpe Diem Special #25, Onitsura's Spring Haze

tokitaru kane no ayumi ya haru kasumi

the bell from far away -
how it moves along in its coming
through the Spring haze



8 comments:

  1. I feel like I am in a mystic haze at the moment... some spring might snap me out of it....maybe!

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  2. Yes, yes, yes! I love bluebells, although I haven't seen any since I sold my farm in Pennsylvania nearly 20 years ago. Thank you!

    Holybell

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  3. beautiful! loved the haiku reading!

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  4. What would happen if you wrote it this way:

    spring bluebells
    ringing in the forest
    mystic haze

    Thanks for the inspiration!

    Bellsong

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    1. I like either way. Thanks for sharing :)

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  5. Beautifully crafted haiku Jenn

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  6. Beautiful words and image!

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