Monday, March 4, 2013

Haiku: Thin Ice

Pond ice thins
As mercury rises
Danger lurks






Carpe Diem #137, Usurai (thin ice)
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13 comments:

  1. Locomente3/04/2013

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    1. Unknown3/05/2013

      Thank you Satya. It may take me a few days, but I appreciate this deeply.

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  2. Maliny3/05/2013

    The fact wonderfully knit into a haiku . beautiful .

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  3. Amrit Sinha3/05/2013

    Treading over thin ice is dangerous !!!

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  4. Anonymous3/05/2013

    At least as the mercury rises, you've less chance of falling on uranus #boomtish.
    Thank you for sharing :)

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  5. Magical Mystical Teacher3/05/2013

    Some people don't mind the thinning ice.

    Thin Ice

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  6. joanne3/05/2013

    Too wise to try! I do like when the mercury begins to rise, and the snowstorms are over.,.

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  7. Anonymous3/05/2013

    I believe I'll heed your poetic warning - much nicer than the sign, yet still effective :)

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  8. Maggie Grace3/05/2013

    Waiting for mercury rising here. Your photo actually looks like our river 5 blocks from my home.

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  9. brudberg3/05/2013

    Ice here still solid. Bicycle on it every day.

    As ice gets thin
    detour a necessity
    late for work

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  10. moondustwriter3/05/2013

    some always take their chances...

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  11. Anonymous3/05/2013

    danger lurks.... great photo for lovely penned haiku ^_^

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  12. Woman'n'Beyond3/06/2013

    The hard fact very nicely melted into a haiku. beautiful!

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