overflows with melting snow
Spring's fury floods in
Carpe Diem Special #27, Onitsura's Valley Stream
tani-mizu ya ishi mo utayomu yama-zakura
the wild cherry:
stones also are singing their songs
in the valley stream
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Melting snow invites spring !!!
ReplyDeleteExcellent, such power in those words :)
ReplyDeleteAmazing haiku Jenn. Love the way you have used the haiku by Onitsura to write your own. The melting snow is surely a messenger of Spring coming up.
ReplyDeleteNothing soft and subtle about the arrival of THIS spring!
ReplyDeleteSinging Stone
love a racing, raging stream that marks the start of spring!
ReplyDeleteYes, so often the spring stream is raging! You caught that so well in your words!
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beautifull words!
ReplyDeleteOh I want that rage to come here.
ReplyDeleteNature's rage and fury is truly breathtaking! Awesome!
ReplyDeleteYes, I feel every bit of your haiku. The weather here. Although we were fortunate not to have the river flood. Powerful haiku.
ReplyDeleteSprings's fury, that's a new expression. Very creative.
ReplyDeletealoha Jennifer. i like the words "flood fury" that brings a strong image to mind. cool. aloha.
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