Friday, March 29, 2013

Haiku: Waves


Waves foaming
Cool breeze o'er the ocean
Mermaids sing



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Carpe Diem Special

suzukaze ya koku ni michite matsu no koe

the cool breeze
fills the empty vault of heaven
with the voice of the pine-tree



6 comments:

  1. Song of the mermaid is always beautiful :-)

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  2. I can see their heads in that dazzling blue sea....

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  3. You can never go wrong with mermaids in poetry

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  4. I'm delighted to see that someone strayed away from the pine and took inspiration from another part of Onitsura's haiku!

    Seductive Pine

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  5. Beautiful ambience in this glimpse of sea worlds!

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  6. Love the Haiku. Often, at the Sea, I have sworn I've heard the song of Mermaids. Usually after I've had a couple of beers - but sometimes stone, cold sober.

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