A Lanturne poem is a five-line poem shaped like a Japanese lantern with a 1/2/3/4/1 syllabic pattern.
White
lily
blooms in the
garden after
rain.
Old
sea goat
sails into
storm’s eye one last
time.
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Today's Haiku
Haiku Heights April A to Z: Lily
Spring is here at last
Easter lilies are calling
To girls in dresses
Carpe Diem: Capricorn ("Goat-horned" The Sea Goat)
Old sea goat
Butting heads with the ram
Cosmic clash
Your poetry is well penned and wonderful energy ~ ^_^
ReplyDeleteLove your Lanturne poetry. There is a Dutch poetry from called elfje that has 1/2/3/4/1 words. The syllables adds a different challenge. Liked your Lanturne better than the haiku. Hope that was okay. Actually sort of mesmerized by the new form...new to me.
ReplyDeleteI have not heard of the Dutch elfje, I'll have to look into that. I'm glad you like the lanturnes. Thanks!
DeleteLove the Lanturne in form and word.
ReplyDeleteVery interesting - very nice. Yes, learnt a lot here as well as nice reading.
ReplyDeleteCosmic clash ... awesome line. Good haiku, a gem, so to say. I like that other poetry form of the Japanese Lantern very well too. Have to try that once.
ReplyDeleteLovely words and I learned something new...thank you :)
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