Monday, January 14, 2013

Haiku Embers

Deep in the mountain
Hephaestus forging steel sword
Molten embers burn



Olympic Embers
Lightning rods fabricated
Burn all through the night




CARPE DIEM a daily haiku meme: Today is Ember

4 comments:

  1. Anonymous1/14/2013

    Oh yes, this is a wonderful take on the prompt. Truly a gift from the gods. Thank you :)

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  2. Nice set of haiku Jenn. I love the way how you've used mythology in this one. Thank you for sharing.

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  3. Love the alignment of these haiku! There seems to be extra messages in the embers of legend within a mountain and the fabricated lightning rods like the discarded tools of Zeus or Thor! Lovely!

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  4. The mythology of blacksmiths is a very original and nice touch to the prompt.

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