I can imagine those commuters waiting in the cold winter blast. I have traveled several years with the train to my work and sometimes I had the early shift in the hospital where I was working at that time. In the cold winter it wasn't a pleasure to wait on the train on a cold winterly and windy station. Brrr ...
The details of the second haiku really knocked my socks off. Well done!
ReplyDeletea sensory delight....fabulous imagery..
ReplyDeleteI can imagine those commuters waiting in the cold winter blast. I have traveled several years with the train to my work and sometimes I had the early shift in the hospital where I was working at that time. In the cold winter it wasn't a pleasure to wait on the train on a cold winterly and windy station. Brrr ...
ReplyDeleteFunny, in Brisbane we all huddle like that when it gets below 10c. Lovely haikus on the theme. Thank you :)
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