Join me for short break of reflection and enjoy a cup of poetry.
Loved it! A little twist in your sequence!
The circle is unbroken!Scent of Spring Rain
Where I live this is almost always the true weather report for March!!
that was a different manner of depiction . loved it nonetheless ! unique :)
Oh, the weather is so unpredictable!Old Willow Woman
Awesome ... the circle of life caught in a few words.
Beautifully woven! I liked the technique of inversionCheers!Gracyhttp://www.gracydsouza.com/2013/03/01/winter-bids-bye-haiku/
Loved the word play, very different!
What a wonderful way to describe winter and spring ... well done !!!
Very clever :-)
Don't they some say that one day the lion shall lie down with the lamb? Perhaps when their marching is done.Thank you for sharing with us :)
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Loved it! A little twist in your sequence!
ReplyDeleteThe circle is unbroken!
ReplyDeleteScent of Spring Rain
Where I live this is almost always the true weather report for March!!
ReplyDeletethat was a different manner of depiction . loved it nonetheless ! unique :)
ReplyDeleteOh, the weather is so unpredictable!
ReplyDeleteOld Willow Woman
Awesome ... the circle of life caught in a few words.
ReplyDeleteBeautifully woven! I liked the technique of inversion
ReplyDeleteCheers!
Gracy
http://www.gracydsouza.com/2013/03/01/winter-bids-bye-haiku/
Loved the word play, very different!
ReplyDeleteWhat a wonderful way to describe winter and spring ... well done !!!
ReplyDeleteVery clever :-)
ReplyDeleteDon't they some say that one day the lion shall lie down with the lamb?
ReplyDeletePerhaps when their marching is done.
Thank you for sharing with us :)