Summer’s promising starlets
Dancing for water
Singing out for salvation
Forgotten flowers
Beneath the hot sun spotlight
Writhing white petals
Summer’s promising starlets
A garden mirage
The flower gypsies create
Dancing for water
Beckoning your attention
To hear their voices
Singing out for salvation
Victims of the heat
Sway to the summer’s swan song
Forgotten flowers
This is some kind of form you have attempted here and with perfection. Every stanza is ending with successive lines of first stanza. These flower gypsies are amazingly beautiful, but there is tinge of sadness too. Flowers decaying of heat, shortage of water and above all neglect.
ReplyDeleteI lovedt he way you carried this one !!!
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